Acrostic Poem
JOURNALS…
Jumbled full of thoughts and ideas
Oblivious to status
Unbolts the inner soul
Rejuvenates the lonely and weary
Never to early or late
Always open and near
Listens to secrets and dreams
Special memory keepers
Found Poem

Concrete Poem
I Am Poem
I am a Triceratops
I am three horned and slow
I wonder why I have to be a distinct reptile
I hear the wind blowing through the trees in my home, the forest
I see my children grazing peacefully at the river bank
I want to munch on the luscious green plants
I am three horned and slow
I pretend that nothing can harm me since I am the largest of all the horned dinosaurs
I feel safe because I always travel in a small group
I touch the leaves with my scissor like teeth
I worry that my sharp horns and wide frill will not scare T. Rex away
I cry when one of my kin dies or is killed by another dinosaur
I am three horned and slow
I understand that I am from Western North America
I say I am as big as a garbage truck
I dream about getting to walk on the Earth again
I try to protect my young against predators
I hope I will always be remembered as an amazing creature
I am three horned and slow

Sources Used:
Lessem, Don., and Dodson, Peter, PH.D. Time for Learning: Dinosaurs. Illinois: Publications International, Ltd., 2004.
Tricerotops JPEG picture.
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Emily, I love your poems but the Christmas found poem is my favorite! It’s similar to the one I made about Thanksgiving, in that you listed the ways Christmas is meaningful to you.
I also really liked the purse poem. I agree, mine is full of so much stuff. The older I get the bigger my purse has to be. Especially being a mommy, it needs to be the size of a small carry on piece of luggage!
You did a great job on all your poems. I enjoyed reading them!
Lorie
It is quite obvious that you put a lot of time and effort into the composition of each poem. Your word choice has been carefully crafted…you include so many literary devices: alliteration, simile and metaphor! In your I POEM, I liked the garbage truck comparison; “memory keepers” is a lovely metaphor from your Acrostic; and of course, the concrete poem-the shape of the words, your different font colors and italicized words gave the poem even deeper depth! Well Done Emily! Have you shared these carefully-crafted creations with your students yet?
You did a great job on all of the poems. I thought the purse was a good idea. I especially liked the dinosaur too. When I was a kid an oil company gave away plastic replicas of dinosaurs to promote their business and I still have my triceretops and brontosaurus! Triceretops is my favorite also!